Here's a great review I received this morning for Chapter 5 of Damaged Goods. Yea, I'm super giddy today!
Hi again Melanie.
I love that transition in the last couple paragraphs! It's really super!
Also your dialogue is great - each character has their own distinctive language that suits they're physical description - if that makes sense.
Out of all the chapters so far I think Chapter 5 is my favorite. I don't have any suggestions for changes. I can visualize quite clearly what's happening in the story and it's interesting. If I were a pre-teen reading this I think I'd be riveted!
Thanks for the read - look forward to more,
Anne
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